Review: Obedience by Isabella Jordan

Posted July 13, 2014 by Cocktails and Books in Reviews / 0 Comments

obedienceMeela must marry a prince from another planet in order to ensure the security of her people. Trouble is Meela’s known to be a bit feisty, and sometimes that gets her into trouble. It’s bad enough she has no say in who she’ll marry. Worse still, the queen places an obedience curse on Meela to thwart her errant ways.

As a result of the curse, Meela finds herself in plenty of predicaments not exactly fit for a princess. But what’s a princess to do when two gorgeous hunks come along and place sensual demands on her Meela’s not sure she can — or even wants — to deny?

 

 

 

Series: N/A
Release Date: 04/20/2014
Publisher: Changeling Press
Source: Publisher
Reviewer: Marie
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Reviewer’s Thoughts

I know that authors who write novellas hate it when reviewers use the line, “I wish it had been a full-length novel.”  But there are some novellas that truly would benefit as one.  This was one of those.

What I liked about this story, was the storyline.  It was unique and creative.  The author has a GREAT idea.  The problem?  The storyline had no room to grow.  Being a novella with erotic intent, it did it’s job.  But I would LOVE to read what could have happened over a much larger period of time.  It would make for a wonderful book!

Everything said, the author is a good writer.  I enjoyed what I did read.  I just wish it hadn’t felt so much like an outline for something much greater.