Guest Review: Becoming His Slave – Talon p.s.

Posted January 19, 2014 by Shannon in Reviews / 4 Comments

15705408BECOMING HIS SLAVE {New Edition} ~ Dominion of Brothers series book 1
By Talon ps

~Your desires have never been so explored until you have submitted them to the control of Dominus Trenton Leos.~

BDSM & D/s / MF / Erotic Romance / Some MM & FF~ explicit language

Available at most ebook retailers and in print, only at Amazon

The four months that went into the rigorous editing plus an additional 10K+ words has finally paid off and you get to reap the rewards!!!!

As a writer, Katianna hovers at the alluring edge of bringing what she creates with exquisite eroticism into her very concealed life. Her books seduce her readers with stories taking them into extremes of erotic pleasure that have never been her own experience. That is until one night unbeknownst to herself, she confessed a secret desire she’d kept under lock and key to Trenton Leos, who’s now intent to bring her into his world of Dominance and Submission where he’s not just any Dom, he’s the Dominus. The Master of all Doms.

Life with the Dominus promises to surround her with rich, somatic passions, but it also comes with danger, and she’s not sure she’s strong enough to hang on. Especially when being with him means submitting her life to Becoming His Slave.

Credit and Special thanks for the editing endeavor goes to Alison Greene, Lee Brazil, Havan Fellows, Sara York and Laura Harner.

Series: Dominion of Brothers #1
Release Date: March 30th 2012
Publisher: Self Published
Source: Provided by Author/Publisher via Manic Readers
Reviewer: Victoria
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Reviewer’s Thoughts

4.5 Cocktails

Becoming His Slave is the first book in the Dominion of Brothers series by Talon P.S. A couple of things struck me as I finished this book. First was the length of it, this book was around 550 pages and none of them filler pages either. There is action, drama and/or sex on every page. The other was that there was the short blurb about the story only tells about half of the story. This book takes you on a wonderful journey that is filled with hot sex and complex relationships and how it’s all combined.

Katianna is an up and coming writer when she meets Trenton. She has many issues regarding trust, and communication. There were many times that she was borderline winy but I wonder if it’s a combination of how she overthinks things and being a writer and letting your imagination take hold. Katianna is not the bravest sole is the world either.

Trenton is a hot and sexy Dom, but he is not just any Dom he is a Dominus (Master of all Doms). He trains both subs and slaves and he is also the owner of a security firm for several high profile clients. Nothing get past Trenton. He loves his life but wants a life slave and he thinks Katianna is just the person for it.

My biggest issue with Trenton was he was unwilling to compromise with Katianna. When he wants something and he seems bound and determined to get it his way. My other issue was his lack of communication with Katianna. While he tells her he wants her to be his life slave he forgets to explain what that is to her and tell her his feelings for her. (I mean who wants to spend their life with someone who won’t tell them they love them!) That might have moved everything along faster.

I was not fond of how the story ended. The book just stopped. Now I am left wanting to know how Paris and Diesel turn out as well as several of the other characters like Amelia and Cliff. I will be picking up the next couple of books in the series shortly. I enjoyed this book a lot. I had a hard time putting this book down. The author does a great job of drawing you into this story. I found it well written and very detailed. The main and massive amount of secondary characters were interesting and realistic. Overall, this was a magnificent book.

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4 responses to “Guest Review: Becoming His Slave – Talon p.s.

  1. Terry

    Becoming His Slave is a GREAT BOOK!!! It has everything – romance (erotic), adventure, danger, lust, and a wonderful variety of loving and strong characters that surround Katianna and Trenton.

    Talon weaves a story that brings his characters to life. He gives us Aww moments, humorous moments and HOLY HELL moments and everything in between in this story. I enjoy a book that you can see happening while you read it. So much so you wind up talking to the characters. LOL

    I’m glad Trenton didn’t come right out and explain to Katianna exactly what he was expecting in the beginning. We would have missed so much. In Katianna’s journey to understanding what he was asking of her we got to see and meet a lot of different characters. One of which is Cliff. Oh you are so going to love his book, “A Place for Cliff” *sighs* just an FYI you are going to want a box of tissue handy when you read it.

    Talon did an excellent job of not just giving us a story but of setting up an amazing series. I have read all three books in this series so far. Becoming His Slave, A Place for Cliff and Rough Attraction. You are not going to want to miss any of them. There are also more books to follow. So we will get to see the rest of our loved characters stories. You can also get a peek at some of the characters and their stories on Talon ps and Princess so web page go check it out *wink*

  2. Thank you so much for the wonderful review on Talon’s book. **my hearts aflutter here.** You truly made my day, and our editor’s. Its her birthday, so it was nice for her to hear her hard work paid off. Thank you again and warm winds ~ the Twins

  3. Dylan Ross

    This like all Talons books left me wanting for more. You are an amazing writer with amazing stories to tell. I have purchased every book of yours there is to buy and this series will be no different. Those who do not take the oppurunity to read your books are truly missing something very special.